18 October 2013

Some Thoughts About Good Manga 9

Time for another Some Thoughts post. I recently had the chance to read two works by the French comic artist Bastien Vivès, and I feel like commenting on them while they're still fresh in my mind.
First one up is A Taste of Chrorine (Le Goût du chlore). This is one incredibly chill book that won the best new artist award in the Angoulême International Bande Desinée Festival. By chill, I mean it captures the ambience of a swimming pool perfectly. The showers before the pool, getting water in your eyes, the feeling of breathlessness as you struggle to reach the other side of the lane, and even the unpleasant sights of people you rather hadn’t seen in their swimsuits… Yup. It’s all here. But what really allows the smell of chlorine to come out from the pages are the perspectives. 
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The pictures above are some panels which I particularly liked for their use of perspective. Usually, the view is kept low just above the water-level to make you feel as if you’re there in the pool, right beside the protagonist. Others are from a first-person view, like in the very middle picture above, where the protagonist practising his backstrokes are simply shown by an overhead arm and a roof. All in all, there’s a very good mix of shots from first and third person, from above, below, and at the water-level to immerse the readers figuratively in the pool.
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One thing about the art that immediately sticks out to me as a person who usually reads manga is the depiction of motion. Manga tend to heavily use speed lines, after-images, motion-waves, impact/shock bubbles, and extreme perspective to make you feel like you’re moving along with the characters to convey a real sense of kinetic energy. Western comics traditionally tend not to rely on such techniques, preferring to show motion from the sidelines. Although A Taste of Chlorine doesn't really need to show motion all that well since it relies more on the ambience to pull in its readers, I have to admit the rather static art did take me out a little bit. Even so, there are some bits where I thought it was done reasonably well without resorting to generic speed lines. For instance, in the pic below, a simple warping of the background gives the illusion that the character is lunging backwards to spring into a backstroke. Or at least, it does to my eyes.
As for the plot [minor spoilers ahead], it’s a minimalistic tale about a boy swimming to ease his back problems, who becomes more interested in swimming as he develops interest in a girl who frequents the same pool. I actually came in expecting a romance story and was pleasantly surprised to find out that wasn't the case. While there definitely is an element of romance, it’s really only there to add to the mood and serve as a vehicle to move the story along. The real “story” is a coming-of-age tale about a weak-willed boy getting his first taste of desire, ambition, a real sense of drive to accomplish something, whatever it is. It’s done in a very clever and subtle way in which the theme is only vaguely hinted once around the middle of the story, which the author then tries to make the reader temporarily forget through the romance sub-plot, all in order to surprise you just as much as the protagonist in the epiphany that occurs in the memorable final panel. If you read through the story too fast, you’ll likely miss it, making you go “Huh? That’s it?” So slow down and pace yourself while reading this. All in all, a good comic. It even made me want to go swimming (actual swimming, not just riding water slides), which is quite the feat since I hate/suck at swimming. I think even an 8 year-old can out-swim me. 
The only real complaint I have is that you have to shell out $15~20 for what's basically a short oneshot. I don't like to comment on pricing since that's got nothing to do with a work’s quality, but you have to admit that it can still affect your final opinion (video game reviewers, please take note). The book itself is about 130 pages but most are dialogue-less atmosphere pages and I'm certain a skilled mangaka could have easily achieved just as much in half the length if he had to work under a more constrained page limit. Of course, the main reason why the book costs this much isn't due to the page length but because of the cost of printing in colour. Thank god the manga industry publishes almost always in B&W, which allows good lengthy stories at a much cheaper price. Admittedly, a black and white version of A Taste of Chlorine would certainly lesson the great ambience afforded by turquoise and blue shades, but… I don’t know, I think it’d still be fine. I mean, look at Urushibara’s art in Waters.
The next Vivès work, Polina, is in black & white and substantially longer. Well… Technically, it’s only about 70 pages longer but there’s a lot more dialogue so it feels a lot longer. In any case, the story is about Polina's life from childhood to adulthood, and her difficulties in becoming a professional dancer. Speaking more generally, however, the story is essentially about what it takes to become a successful artist. For this, Vivès paints a very ascetic portrayal, in which "satisfaction" is a non-existent concept to the artist. He must constantly strive for greater heights and complacency in either his skill or position is to signify his downfall. Love seems to be an unnecessary distraction, if not almost detrimental to this end, since an artist must never rely too much on others and should learn to stand on his own. This is reinforced by the role of Polina's teachers who prove the old adage that you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make it drink. In the first three-quarters of the story, Polina is still too young, too inexperienced to understand the advice given by her elders and would rather dismiss it as incomprehensible. But as her outlook in life matures, the truth behind these once-nonsensical maxims are revealed and she finally understands why an artist practices his craft. Bojinski, Polina's influential teacher (the man in the cover pic above), is given a fair amount of screen-time but I don't think it's too appropriate to liken this comic to a mentor-student story like The Karate Kid, which heavily emphasizes the bond between the master and the student. Polina's narrative is one-sidedly focused on the student and the relationship is too subdued and solemn for a comparison like that to work. Instead, Bojinski's memorable scenes at the beginning and the end serves to provide a light framework in which you can evaluate Polina's journey as an artist.
As for the art, it's done in quick impressionist-style sketches and it works quite well for the most part. I particularly liked the character design for Bojinski, whose eyes and mouth are hidden by his glasses and beard to effectively hide his facial expressions, transforming him into an enigmatic and intimidating authority-figure. Kind of an Ikari Gendou, if you will. The best part about his design is at the story's end, where these obscured features are illuminated for the first time, breaking the illusion of an aloof teacher that Polina had formed in her mind since her childhood. My only gripe with the art is Polina's nose. I don't know why but Vivès decided to give only Polina a thick black shade on her nasal bridge, which annoyed me because it kept reminding me of the infamous "tumblr nose," if you know what I'm referring to. It's not as if Polina's nose is uniquely hooked upwards or anything. The side profile shots of her gives a very average outline for a nose. So why the shade? To distinguish her from the rest? She already stands out well enough though. I don't know, it's... a mystery.

In any case, both stories are solid and I wholly recommend them. Although A Taste of Chlorine is the only one that's available in English at the moment, Polina too will be translated by next year so keep it in mind if you're looking for something interesting to read.

17 October 2013

Tomorrow's Joe v13 (last updated Dec. 3)

Finally, a return to Joe!
Alright, we got our editor back!

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14 October 2013

Gyanki-Hen Complete

And part 2 of Gambling Emperor Zero is finally complete at 10 volumes. I know this part was rather lacking in the crazy life-or-death gambles that we were so fond of back in part 1, but I hope you found it entertaining nontheless. Here's hoping that part 3, whenever it comes, will be more full of insane, over-the-top action.

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25 September 2013

Gyanki-Hen Volume 10 (Oct 11)

At last, chapter 79 means volume 9 is done, meaning just 1 more volume left in Gyanki-Hen! I know the Kijurou arc has been going on a little too long and would've benefited from being about 2 volumes shorter, but I hope you're still enjoying it nonetheless. Don't you worry, the final volume in Zero Part 2 will definitely bring this arc to a close and a likely return to the original plot-line, with a cameo by a certain someone.
To my raw-provider, if you're reading this, can you scan the cover page for me as well?
Fukumoto really loves dem wordplay.

Fixed version of c86 updated.

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9 September 2013

Battle for Chengdu

Volume 35 is finally done and so is the conquest of Shu. Though Wei, Wu, and Shu are nominally still a part of Han, you can pretty much think of this as the start of the Three Kingdoms. For the volume release, I fixed the error with pages 174 and 175 of chapter 224, and I finally bothered to update and reorganize the cast of characters list. I took out most of the really minor characters and tried to make it more compact, with only 10 people per page. I know 99% of you don't really look at it, but for that 1% who originally requested I make some character chart, I hope you're finding it somewhat useful.

Also, volume 35 makes a pretty good stopping point, so I urge people who've still yet to try Sangokushi to not worry about the series length or update speed and give the first couple volumes a read. You can find all volumes here: mediafire.com/sangokushi

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4 September 2013

Gyanki-Hen Volume 9 (Sept 24)

Volume 8's now done with chapter 70! Volume 9 will follow shortly and I'll make the updates in this post. In other news, I hear FKMTcrazy is looking to get some help (translators, editor/cleaners, typesetters, etc.) So if you enjoy reading Fukumoto manga and can help out, you should head over to their site and leave a comment.
And here we go with volume 9!
I hope the explanation in the chapter makes sense to those unfamiliar with Japanese. I tried to explain it without going too tl note heavy and using a lot of Japanese terms.
It's possible to figure out what Zero realized after reading this chapter if you've been paying close attention.

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24 August 2013

Historie Status Update

First off, let's all be glad that Historie had a new chapter this month! Woohoo! Apparently, as the author's note states, Iwaaki's workplace had a leak and "a lot" got wet and had to be salvaged. Also, in the aftermath of the affair, he also seems to have strained his body and had to allow his body to recuperate. For this reason, I assume, the last page of this Historie chapter now says it is on a bi-monthly schedule, meaning a chapter every other month. I don't know if this is temporary but I very much hope so, or we'll never see this manga end. Also, Historie v8 just went on sale in Japan, so I'll eventually try to put out better scanlations using the tankoban raws when I can find it like I did with v7.

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20 August 2013

Sangokushi v35 (last updated Sept 7)

GET HYPE. ZHANG FEI VS. MA CHAO. The duel of all duels, coming this volume! Also, it can be rather humorous to come across such romanticized depictions like the pic below in RotK after getting acquainted with the academic literature written about the Three Kingdoms period.
To quote the historian Rafe de Crespigny, "Shu-Han was founded as a warlord enterprise in a provincial state, and it never became anything more." For those of you who're curious and don't mind spoilers to the story, this article (where the quote is from) offers a nice concise history on this period: https://digitalcollections.anu.edu.au/html/1885/42048/3KWJin.html
Such a beautiful poem, no doubt more beautiful in the original tale due to the conciseness of written-Chinese. There're many poems included in Luo Guanzhong's Romance of the Three Kingdoms but excluded in the manga. It's nice to see this one was kept in and I hope my translation hasn't butchered it.
Ahh, the feigned-retreat. Probably the most successful battle tactic in history.
I think Ma Chao is in his mid-30s while Zhang Fei's either in his mid-40s or pushing 50s at this point.
Sorry for the break but I'll get this volume wrapped up before doing the next Zero volume. Also, I've messed up the chapter title order in the table of contents page. I'll have it fixed for the volume-release.

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18 August 2013

Gyanki-Hen volume 8 (last updated Sept 3)

Sorry for the long break since releasing Punpun, but you know how life can be. Especially when a new video game comes out and you're battling over half the world as the Papal States. In any case, I've had my gaming-fix (until Rome 2 comes out), so I'll be going back to a more regular schedule.
So here's a new chapter of Zero to kick things off! I'll be releasing a new chapter each day, though alternating between Zero and Sangokushi. As for Tomorrow's Joe, my typesetter has left temporarily due to life, but we should be able to resume once I'm done with Zero Part 2 (I have all the raws), which ends at volume 10. And I swear to god, I'll REALLY REALLY REALLY PRIORITIZE Joe once I'm done with Zero part 2. I really want to get that series done sometime in 2014.
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Nope, not significant at all.
Sidekicks are so much better in part 2 compared to part 1.
You think they would've just tied the rope around something...
Don't you just love how everyone in a Fukumoto-manga constantly looks shocked even at mundane statements?
Sorry for the absence of releases over the weekend.
One more chapter to go.

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19 July 2013

Alexandros - Dream for World Conquest (Some Thoughts About Good Manga 8)

Happyscans and I would finally like to present the scanlated release of Yasuhiko Yoshikazu's "Alexandros - Dream for World Conquest." As a big fan of Yasuhiko Yoshikazu and history, this project was an absolute dream and I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed working on it.
Since this is the first (of hopefully many) Yasuhiko manga I did, I want to take the time to comment on him, because as famous as he is, his contributions to manga are often out-shadowed by his work in the anime industry. It can't be helped though, when you have a hand in creating something as iconic and seminal as the Gundam series, but it's in manga where Yasuhiko shines best. Why? He is a FANTASTIC artist. My golden rule of setting apart good character designers from bad ones is if you can still differentiate characters even if their hair style, colour, and eyes were interchanged. With a simplified, "cartoonier" style like Tezuka's, this is far easier to do, since the artist isn't restricted by strict human proportions.
However, if you're going for a more semi-realistic artsyle, this is quite difficult to do without actually drawing the minute features of the human face. Now I might be just biased because I grew up with manga, but I think a lot of Western comic artists try to overdo the realism and end up compromising the appealing approachability afforded by simpler character designs, as Scott McCloud points out in the above picture. I think the current Yukimura and Yasuhiko are solid examples of artists that can strike just the right balance between this "distinct realism" and "approachability." Of course, as I've said before, my personal favourite is Katou Shinkichi (see pic below). That man knows all about this balance. Never goes overboard with cross-hatching and still keeps his designs distinct but clean.
In any case, let's go back to Yasuhiko Yoshikazu. He's a fantastic character designer as I've just said, and the only place you can appreciate this is in his manga because hell, it's just too damn costly to do in anime. But what about his stories? Is his writing as good as his drawing? Well, in the case of Alexandros, I think the answer is a definite yes.
Every good biography needs a focus. When you're telling a story spanning several decades (only about 3 in Alexander's case), you need a tight focus to tie it all together so it doesn't feel like the loose ramblings of an old man. For Alexander the Great, that focus has usually been to question his "greatness." Views on Alexander have ranged anywhere from a cultured conqueror spreading Hellenism for the world's benefit to an alcoholic, megalomanic, and brutish tyrant. "Alexandros - Dream for World Conquest" is Yasuhiko's own attempt to answer this question. Like a proper historian, Yasuhiko breaks away from Alexander's popular depictions in the media and presents a balanced picture. We see him at his best, bravely leading his hetairoi into the thick of every battle or nobly treating Darius' mother and daughters after the battle of Gaugamela. We see him at his worst, murdering Cleitus, torturing Philotas, or sacking Persepolis. As we follow his campaign, we see him understandably and naturally transform from a mere idolizer of Achilles into a ruler self-assured in his greatness and divinity. Lysimachus, our neutral narrator, never wears anachronistic modern-day morality-goggles, and is careful to only gently nudge the reader along in ultimately deciding for themselves on which side of the greatness-spectrum Alexander lies. Whatever your conclusion, Lysimachus' rousing monologue at the end reminds us that Alexander's deeds were something no man could follow up, and that alone deserves respect, regardless of the man's moral fiber. By the way, Lysimachus is a choice pick as the narrator, since he, as the second longest-lived diadochi, is in a prime position to look back on the effects that Alexander had, both during and after his life.
Of course, nitpickers might point to the omission of Alexander's consolidation of power through assassinations upon ascending to the throne, or the scant mention of the sack of Tyre (a pity, since it's one of the most interesting sieges in antiquity) and his purges, but that was really because Yasuhiko was restricted to a length of 1-volume, since this was supposed to be just a standard adaptation of the NHK channel's history special. So even though it'd be great to see a more detailed view of the Battle of Hydaspes or the various rivalries among Alexander's generals, you can understand how these aspects aren't as essential when considering Yasuhiko's goal in this manga. Still, you have to give credit to Yasuhiko for doing his utmost best at maintaining historical accuracy (except his handling of the march through Gedrosian Desert since he never met up with Nearchos' fleet). 
One final thing I'd like to mention as the translator is the spelling of human/city names. I often went with the ancient Greek spelling for flavour reasons, so you'll see Thebai instead of Thebes or Tyros instead of Tyre. Looking back, however, I wasn't very consistent, as I sometimes used Latin spellings like Ptolemaeus, Lysimachus, and Issus, instead of Ptolemaios, Lysimachos, and Issos. I sincerely apologize if this caused any confusion.

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